Did you use any filtration? if not i'd wonder if a half grade or so would bring out the lettering a bit more. But of course the way i see something and what you see will probably never be the same. In any case it's a nice image.
For me, the image is a little on the light side but as you can see from the paper negative on the left, there are a lot of light tones in it. I. gave this 35 seconds at Grade 1 to try and bring out some of the detail followed by a 14 second exposure at Grade 4. I wanted to burn in the headstone but as you can imagine, I can't see through the paper negative.